domingo, 18 de enero de 2015

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thesis statement:
 Nowadays teenagers consume much more alcohol or other type of drugs than before. they think that they are old enough but they don't really know the consequences of their consume.

1. for or against.

2. Explain my own opinion of why I think they  consume a lot of alcohol...( drugs)
2.1 they want to fit
2.2 Alcohil gives them force to do things that they wouldn't have done with no alcohol inside
2.3 they do it because everybody does it

3. which are the consequences of drinking or smoking
3.1 headache
3.2 stomackache
3.3 the day after drinking they are going to lose the whole day because they won't feel like doing anything.
3.4 they are going to forget great experiences just because they are not going to remember them the next day.

4. my own experience with alcohol
4.1 I have drunk many times
4.2 how I felt when I drunk

5 advise
5.1 there are many ways to have fun that don't include alcohol or drugs
5.2 alternatives: cinema, karaoke, sport...

6.govermment should do something for not allowing young people to drink or smoke.

7 conclusion: you have a brain, use it. If you want to drink you are free to do it but please, think about the consequences.

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