thesis statement:
Nowadays teenagers consume much more alcohol or other type of drugs than before. they think that they are old enough but they don't really know the consequences of their consume.
1. for or against.
2. Explain my own opinion of why I think they consume a lot of alcohol...( drugs)
2.1 they want to fit
2.2 Alcohil gives them force to do things that they wouldn't have done with no alcohol inside
2.3 they do it because everybody does it
3. which are the consequences of drinking or smoking
3.1 headache
3.2 stomackache
3.3 the day after drinking they are going to lose the whole day because they won't feel like doing anything.
3.4 they are going to forget great experiences just because they are not going to remember them the next day.
4. my own experience with alcohol
4.1 I have drunk many times
4.2 how I felt when I drunk
5 advise
5.1 there are many ways to have fun that don't include alcohol or drugs
5.2 alternatives: cinema, karaoke, sport...
6.govermment should do something for not allowing young people to drink or smoke.
7 conclusion: you have a brain, use it. If you want to drink you are free to do it but please, think about the consequences.
AnaSays
Prácticas de Redacción 2014/2015
domingo, 18 de enero de 2015
education nowadays
education nowadays isn't as good as it used to be some years before, according to students behavior.
From one part is important to mention that now there are more possibilities to study and there is a better system, but does it work? i mean, it is true that now students are more mentally prepared but, what about their behavior? some years before, students liked schoolbut now they think that studying is not their kind of thing. They don't respect anything or anyone, fortunately that doesn't happen with all students.
I remember that when I was a child I used to see older students as a role model but now younger students see us with no respect, they even laugh at us.
From my point of view this is a big problem that education has to solve. I know that sciences or maths or any other subjects are more important, but human skills; in my opinion, sometimes they are more important because there is a big rule: " if you don't respect, you are not going to be respected by anyone".
In conclusion, I think that the solution of this problem is to give as much importance to human skills as before. sometimes knowledge is not everything.
From one part is important to mention that now there are more possibilities to study and there is a better system, but does it work? i mean, it is true that now students are more mentally prepared but, what about their behavior? some years before, students liked schoolbut now they think that studying is not their kind of thing. They don't respect anything or anyone, fortunately that doesn't happen with all students.
I remember that when I was a child I used to see older students as a role model but now younger students see us with no respect, they even laugh at us.
From my point of view this is a big problem that education has to solve. I know that sciences or maths or any other subjects are more important, but human skills; in my opinion, sometimes they are more important because there is a big rule: " if you don't respect, you are not going to be respected by anyone".
In conclusion, I think that the solution of this problem is to give as much importance to human skills as before. sometimes knowledge is not everything.
cheap summer holidays
Azohia beach is the best option for people who have not planned their holidays yet. If you don't know what you can do the next summer holidays here is one option that can help you.
do you like beach? do you like mountains? do you like both? if you don't want to go abroad because it's too expensive you can stay here.one amazing option that you have is going to Azohia's beach. it's a small pleace where you can do several activities, you have mountain, beach, people, partys and beautiful pleaces like "castillitos" or Helen's tower. you can make a reservation on it's hotel or you can pay for few days in any house before going there.
Nowadays cheap beautiful summer holidays are posible.
domingo, 28 de diciembre de 2014
introduction and conclusion essay
Christmas is only the cover of a big business which move serious amounts of money all over the world, and we are just a puppet of this trick.
it is used to say that christmas was one of the most important holiday in the world because of several things; religious beliefs, because there are reencounter of family members that are far or just with no time to see each other, people are happier, more solidary, the streets are with lights... everything seems to be perfect, but in my opinion the reality is that all of that is just business. christmas is the time of waste, the time of spend many and many money in things that are not necessary , things that you can buy in many other circumstances cheaper but people need to buy on Christmas. Even if you are at home or out of it all the messages that you could receive in that dates is to spend and spend and waste money anywhere, in anything, for anybody.
It's a shame, but it's the reality and every year it's going to be worts if we don't do something.
As a conclusion christmas is only a amazing game for companies in which we are just one more toy.
Merry Christmas?
it is used to say that christmas was one of the most important holiday in the world because of several things; religious beliefs, because there are reencounter of family members that are far or just with no time to see each other, people are happier, more solidary, the streets are with lights... everything seems to be perfect, but in my opinion the reality is that all of that is just business. christmas is the time of waste, the time of spend many and many money in things that are not necessary , things that you can buy in many other circumstances cheaper but people need to buy on Christmas. Even if you are at home or out of it all the messages that you could receive in that dates is to spend and spend and waste money anywhere, in anything, for anybody.
It's a shame, but it's the reality and every year it's going to be worts if we don't do something.
As a conclusion christmas is only a amazing game for companies in which we are just one more toy.
Merry Christmas?
lunes, 1 de diciembre de 2014
outlining an essay
I Drinking alcohol is not as amazing as teenager used to think.
II what teenager think about alcohol
A alcohol give them forces to talk with people they would never have spoken
B They don´t really know why they drink, they only say that it's what everybody do
C they drink for fit
III what's the reality of the alcohol
A teenager don´t really know anything about alcohol
B drinking have a lot of consecuences
C next day of drinking you are not going to feel like doing anything
D head-ache, stomath-ache
IV why some places offered alcohol to young people?( less that 18)
V goverment should do something?
VI why this things doesn't happen in other countries?
VII do we have to adapt the same rules as other countries to protect our children?
II what teenager think about alcohol
A alcohol give them forces to talk with people they would never have spoken
B They don´t really know why they drink, they only say that it's what everybody do
C they drink for fit
III what's the reality of the alcohol
A teenager don´t really know anything about alcohol
B drinking have a lot of consecuences
C next day of drinking you are not going to feel like doing anything
D head-ache, stomath-ache
IV why some places offered alcohol to young people?( less that 18)
V goverment should do something?
VI why this things doesn't happen in other countries?
VII do we have to adapt the same rules as other countries to protect our children?
viernes, 14 de noviembre de 2014
Gun ownership/ changing your name
Gun ownership:
1- it can be a bad idea in the wrong hands
2-You can not eliminate violence with more violence
3- you can not justify a death
4- it increases the number of crimes
changing your name:
1- people are not going to remembers you by your new name
2-your name was given by your parents with love
3- you have biggest problems in your life
1- it can be a bad idea in the wrong hands
2-You can not eliminate violence with more violence
3- you can not justify a death
4- it increases the number of crimes
changing your name:
1- people are not going to remembers you by your new name
2-your name was given by your parents with love
3- you have biggest problems in your life
viernes, 31 de octubre de 2014
films or books
The topic under consideration today is if you prefer films or books.For me, books are better that films. If you don't like reading is normal that your opinion is different because you prefer watching two hours of a film better than reading 700 pages of a book. From my point of view it's better to read because the books have more details than films, you can understand much better the argument of the history.
when you are reading, if the book it can makes you feel like other character of it, you get inside the history and sometimes you can dream with it but, does this happen when you watch a film? i don't think so.
everything in this life have advantages and disadvantages, sometimes it depends of the person and of the likes of each one.
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